tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124996108755977048.post4225975650908607647..comments2024-03-08T13:45:27.395+05:30Comments on A Protest of Romance: That's Where He Lives...Sowmya Chakravarthyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16111792272627772775noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124996108755977048.post-24216093225652372732010-02-22T16:05:37.851+05:302010-02-22T16:05:37.851+05:30If this is just pure emotion, it works like a char...If this is just pure emotion, it works like a charm. But when you treat this as fiction, then the problem starts as it devoted too much time on how you felt and not on the actual story. A "plot" as you may say is required to keep the reader hooked. The story got little diluted in the emotions expressed.Souravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09617921338514070009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124996108755977048.post-80607662314950475522010-02-09T15:18:48.705+05:302010-02-09T15:18:48.705+05:30I thought he is Bruce Almighty.
There is no pain a...I thought he is Bruce Almighty.<br />There is no pain at all. Fiction or no fiction, no man alive on this rotting globe is worth the passion you have tried to portray. Because men are a menace to the purity of emotions. Anyway, imagination is not a bad thing. Just like dreaming.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124996108755977048.post-55514493869548165212010-02-09T13:38:53.325+05:302010-02-09T13:38:53.325+05:30Sowmya,
There was a Bengali Song the second stanza...Sowmya,<br />There was a Bengali Song the second stanza according to my interpretation was something like this. <br />Fast forward this emotion(Your article) 15 years and think of him/her one night sitting next to the window in a cold winter night and think if he ever thought of you the same way. And hope today after 15 years he is still thinking of you the same way sitting next to the window and is sad and missing exactly the way you miss him/her.<br />Though I have put him/her but the song was again by Lataji and the song and emotion goes best with a lady though the concept is universal.<br /><br />Rishi.Rishinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124996108755977048.post-17865367965978043182010-02-09T10:34:34.596+05:302010-02-09T10:34:34.596+05:30Nishant,
I am doing very well... U?
Pi,
Thanks ...Nishant,<br /><br />I am doing very well... U?<br /><br />Pi,<br /><br />Thanks for your nice words...<br />Work of fiction ;)<br />Glad u liked itSowmya Chakravarthyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16111792272627772775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5124996108755977048.post-21921013986543392942010-02-08T17:54:05.783+05:302010-02-08T17:54:05.783+05:30pure emotions put subtly in words,
for a love so...pure emotions put subtly in words, <br /><br />for a love so selfless, <br /><br />so self consuming<br /><br />I can almost feel your pain <br />But I can only ALMOST feel your painHibakusha Pigmeathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06721692939728264636noreply@blogger.com